Today my fish died or to be exact 2 of my fish's died and I am so sad and the day is the 23 of September 2020 and I hope that you pray for my fishes from Amelia 😭😭
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 23 September 2020
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hi Amelia i am so sorry for your fishes
ReplyDeleteHi Amelia I'm so sorry about your fish I hope that you are feeling ok.
ReplyDeleteHi Amelia I am sorry about you fish. Next time you can maybe do a little bit more writing. All about your fish and why you picked fish. How meany fish do you have now?
ReplyDeleteHi Amelia. I am so sorry your fish died that must have been a sad day for you.love Eva!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Amelia i'm sorry about your fish.From Aria:)
ReplyDeleteyour fish died that is shameing and sad
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